Ok... Let's see if this works...

Let me know what you think of this...

It's just a childish translation of a song I will use for my story.... the last paragraph is not in the original song... lol and like all should know... Spanish writing don't translate that well into English, so I changed most of the Original song... but the whole idea came from
"Tocame" a song by Sin Bandera.... lol.... Again... this is just the translation!! My translation is just mine and my vary from any other translations of the same song... lol

If you see that I ain’t the same…
That my ego has taken the best of me
If I’m blind walking in a void

If one day I’m sleeping and I can't wake up
If I don’t see what’s going on
If I’m walking without looking
If my worries take the best of me…
If I stop loving what I do.

Please stop me... Don't let me go...
Bring me back...

Touch me, you will bring me back
I will breathe again, just touch me

Touch me and we will be back home
Touch me, you will take away all my fears. Touch me


If you see that I can’t smile
If my worries take the best of me

if you notice the clouds of an uncertain future are clouding my present
and the pain and voices in my head don’t let me get away

Please don’t let it happen
Please bring me back, touch me

Touch me, we will be back home
I will breathe again, just touch me…

Touch me... you are all I need
Your touch is all I need to forget my fears...
just touch me... bring me back...
your touch, your hand is all I need to wake up...to be again in this world
that ain't that bad if you are here with me...
Touch me...

Please be free to edit and modify whatever you want... but... let me know what you did and why... so I can learn :D lol :D

Thank you!!!